Difference between revisions of "Exile"

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*Quetzalcoatl's power was the incarnation of the flame that would raze the earth, or else it was the incarnation of the drought , that would parch the land  
*Quetzalcoatl's power was the incarnation of the flame that would raze the earth, or else it was the incarnation of the drought , that would parch the land  
*Just before Quetzalcoatl was cast away , he took up his artifact and used it to erase every trace of himself from El Dorado
*Just before Quetzalcoatl was cast away , he took up his artifact and used it to erase every trace of himself from El Dorado
*It's strongly suggested ( or in my opinion confirmed) that Quetzalcoatl looked exactly like  Tezcatlipoca in Chapter Ten Episode 21 (here's a quote)"While Quetzalcoatl was removed from a world that would never change, Tezcatlipoca, the friend who once had the same face he did, still remembers him."
<!--*It's strongly suggested ( or in my opinion confirmed) that Quetzalcoatl looked exactly like  Tezcatlipoca in Chapter Ten Episode 21 (here's a quote)"While Quetzalcoatl was removed from a world that would never change, Tezcatlipoca, the friend who once had the same face he did, still remembers him."-->
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