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@@ Line 10: / Line 10: @@
 |character=Oz
 |face=sad
-|dialogue=Hey... You can hear me, right?<br>
+|dialogue=Hey... You can hear me, right? The rocket launch was a failure today too.
-It looks like the rocket launch was a failure today too.
 }}
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@@ Line 22: / Line 21: @@
 |face=happy
 |dialogue=Kurogane-kun... is truly a tough man.<br>
-Failure is the ingredient for success after all. It makes you want to start development again.
+He gets working on development again since failure is the key to success after all.
 }}
 {{VN:Dialogue
 |character=Oz
 |face=neutral
-|dialogue=I wonder... if I can be strong like him too.<br>
+|dialogue=I wonder... if I can be strong like him too. What do you think... "Other" Me?
-Hey... What do you think, Other "Me"?
 }}
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 |character=Oz
 |face=surprised
-|dialogue=Ah, [Player]-kun. When did you get here?
+|dialogue=Oh, [Player]-kun. When did you get here?
 }}
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@@ Line 39: / Line 37: @@
 |face=embarrassed
 |dialogue=Y-You weren't listening to me talking to myself, were you?<br>
-Ahh that's so embarrassing...! Could you please forget about that...?
+Ahh that's so embarrassing...! Could you please pretend it never happened...?
 }}
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@@ Line 45: / Line 43: @@
 |face=surprised
 |dialogue=Eh!? You're giving Valentine's chocolate, to me!?<br>
-I-I don't know why but I can't accept it because I'm shaking too much...!
+I-I don't know why I'm shaking so much... I can't accept your gift like this...!
 }}
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@@ Line 60: / Line 58: @@
 |character=Oz
 |face=b_anger
-|dialogue=Geez... That other "Oz" is ALWAYS pushing things onto me!
+|dialogue=Sheesh... That other "Oz" is ALWAYS pushing things onto me!
 }}
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@@ Line 70: / Line 68: @@
 |character=Oz
 |face=b_neutral
-|dialogue=In situations like these, I want to bring out a bit of "courage" that kid keeps talking about.
+|dialogue=Situations like these, I want to bring out a bit of "courage" that kid keeps rambling about.
 }}
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 |character=Oz
 |face=b_anger
-|dialogue=Sheesh, he's thinking that he'll be my flunky no matter how much time passes, huh?
+|dialogue=He thinks he'll be my flunky no matter how much time passes, huh? Yeesh!
 }}
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 |character=Oz
 |face=b_surprised
-|dialogue=Hey now, is that chocolate for that part of me?<br>
+|dialogue=Hoh, are those chocolate for that part of me? Well, aren't you bold, [Player]!
-You're one fearless guy, [Player]!
 }}
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 |character=Oz
 |face=b_neutral
-|dialogue=If you're thinking of how generous it is to only give me chocolate...<br>
+|dialogue=If you think you can get away with just giving me chocolate... Big mistake.
-you've made a big mistake.
 }}
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 |character=Oz
 |face=b_blush
-|dialogue=You ready? Good. Then let's chow down!
+|dialogue=You ready? Good. Then let's CHOW DOWN~!
 }}
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 |character=Oz
 |face=surprised
-|dialogue=S-Stop! W-What are you doing?!
+|dialogue=S-Stop!! W-What do you think you're doing?!
 }}
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 |character=Oz
 |face=surprised
-|dialogue=I-I said it...! Maybe I have a bit of courage after all...?
+|dialogue=I-I said it...! Maybe I have a bit of courage after all...!
 }}
 {{VN:Dialogue