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 |heading=3 options <i>(Same Response)</i>
 |header=
-!<i>Yeowch!!</i>
+!<i>Yeowch! !</i>
 !<i>A-A dream.....?</i>
 !<i>But, I'm sure she was there......</i>
@@ Line 386: / Line 386: @@
 |face=b_surprised
 |dialogue=H-Hey, that was all on you.<br>
-You went on doing that while you were half-asleep!
+You were even clinging onto me while you were half-asleep!
 }}
 {{VN:Dialogue
@@ Line 452: / Line 452: @@
 |character=Seth
 |face=b_neutral
-|dialogue=Ah, I think I get it.<br>
+|dialogue=It was a mistake for you to be that festive about it.<br>
-That must be what a banquet is if you're this upbeat.
+You don't get it, do you? I'm talking about the purpose behind the banquet.
 }}
 {{VN:Dialogue
@@ Line 498: / Line 498: @@
 |face=desert_b_joy
 |dialogue=Did I hear...... Ice Cream?!<br>
-Oh, this is gonna be so muchfun~!
+Oh, this is gonna be so much fun~!
 }}
 {{VN:Dialogue
@@ Line 521: / Line 521: @@
 |face=b_sad
 |dialogue=You really are forgetful......<br>
-Well, hopefully you'll pick up on this-
+Well, hopefully you'll at least remember this one-
 }}
 {{VN:Dialogue
@@ Line 605: / Line 605: @@
 |face=neutral
 |dialogue=Of course, you will lead them to the next location.<br>
-I suppose you should do it in a majorialized fashion?
+I suppose you should do it by the playbook?
 }}
@@ Line 656: / Line 656: @@
 |character=Gyumao
 |face=joy
-|dialogue=So you thought about listening in just now.<br>
+|dialogue=I was about to ask that just now.<br>
 Aaah...... Excuse me, I need some information.
 }}
@@ Line 744: / Line 744: @@
 |character=Hakumen
 |face=desert_neutral
-|dialogue=The Xuanzang party,<br>
+|dialogue=Xuanzang and their little friends, you're so sure it's really them?
-you're not looking forward to settle things with them, are you?
 }}
 {{VN:Dialogue
@@ Line 833: / Line 832: @@
 |character=Gouryou
 |face=shocked
-|dialogue=The amusement park most likely came from Tokyo too!<br>
+|dialogue=The amusement park even looks like something from Tokyo!<br>
 Gah, this is getting ridiculous......
 }}
@@ Line 1,017: / Line 1,016: @@
 |character=Seth
 |face=b_sad
-|dialogue=That is indeed a problem. We need to stay sharp.
+|dialogue=That really isn't that big of a problem. Anyways, we need to stay sharp.
 }}
 {{VN:Dialogue
 |character=Gouryou
 |face=neutral
-|dialogue=Welp. If I may be so blunt,<br>
+|dialogue=Well now. To be fairly honest,<br>
-I think it was a dumb idea to come here looking for any leads.
+that won't be necessary if we're coming to this place for any leads.
 }}
 {{VN:Dialogue
 |character=Gouryou
 |face=serious
-|dialogue=We got ahead of ourselves and ended up walking into some kind of trap.
+|dialogue=Those guys would've laid out plenty of traps by now.
 }}
@@ Line 1,104: / Line 1,103: @@
 |character=Amatsumara
 |face=smile
-|dialogue=Hahah, this child has spunk. I don't hate youngsters such as yourself.
+|dialogue=Hahah, this child has spunk.<br>
+I don't hate that from youngsters such as yourself.
 }}
 {{VN:Dialogue
@@ Line 1,125: / Line 1,125: @@
 |character=Amatsumara
 |face=anger
-|dialogue=Ah, I'm in charge of keeping guard of something right now.<br>
+|dialogue=No, rather I'm in charge of keeping guard of Endless something-or-the-other.<br>
-I am the "Demon King's servant" as you may call it.
+I am the "Demon King's servant" as I would call myself.
 }}
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 |heading=2 options <i>(Same Response)</i>
 |header=
-!<i>How did he......</i>
+!<i>What did he......</i>
 !<i>Gyaaah!?</i>
 }}
@@ Line 1,326: / Line 1,326: @@
 |character=Hanuman
 |face=desert_b_neutral
-|dialogue=But, I had such a great idea though!<br>
+|dialogue=But, I had such a greeaaat idea though!<br>
 For that reason, I should be fighting alongside you......!
 }}