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 |character=Gouryou
 |face=embarrassed
-|dialogue=Better yet, I may not be taking this journey to India seriously.
+|dialogue=Better yet, I might actually make it to India...... I'm kidding, buhehehe.
 }}
 {{!}}{{VN:Dialogue
@@ Line 233: / Line 233: @@
 A tower with an astonishingly tall gate lies there.
-The sounds of the wind blowing echoed around the people there.
+The sounds of the wind blowing echoed as there's no one here.
 [Player] and the others have finally reached the foot of Flaming Mountains.
@@ Line 462: / Line 462: @@
 |character=Hanuman
 |face=desert_b_joy
-|dialogue=That sounds good! Maybe we'll settle the fight with a game too!
+|dialogue=That sounds good! Games are enough of a fight for me!
 }}
 {{VN:Dialogue
@@ Line 491: / Line 491: @@
 |face=b_anger
 |dialogue=How long has it been -
-No, it has been centuries since I last said your name, hasn't it!?
+No, it has been decades since I last said your name, hasn't it!?
 }}
@@ Line 502: / Line 502: @@
 |header=
 !<i>Uh, Gyumao's the CEO isn't he?</i>
-!<i>Um...... I am the real Xuanzang.</i>
+!<i>Um...... I'm not the real Xuanzang.</i>
 !<i>Are you mistaking me for someone else?</i>
 }}
@@ Line 511: / Line 511: @@
 |face=b_anger
 |dialogue=Graaah, silence!!<br>
-You do not understand the meaning of that title, much less say it!
+You do not understand what it means to choose that name!
 }}
 {{VN:Dialogue
 |character=Gyumao
 |face=b_frown
-|dialogue=Though my face is slightly different,<br>
+|dialogue=Though your face is slightly different,<br>
 I will not be bothered by such trivial matters!
 }}
@@ Line 542: / Line 542: @@
 |character=Gouryou
 |face=surprised
-|dialogue=No, I don't know why you think that.......<br>
+|dialogue=No, I don't remember who you are.......<br>
-There's no way I could look familiar to you!
+I feel like I do remember, but I don't!
 }}
 {{VN:Dialogue
@@ Line 625: / Line 625: @@
 |face=desert_tasty
 |dialogue=I'll give an explanation later.<br>
-Though, I suppose I can spoil the situation a little?
+I suppose you could play along with the situation for now?
 }}
 {{VN:Dialogue
@@ Line 647: / Line 647: @@
 |character=Hakumen
 |face=desert_anger
-|dialogue=And that's why we're here...... Hey!<br>
+|dialogue=And this here is my son...... Hey!<br>
 Drop the cue cards right now!
 }}
@@ Line 659: / Line 659: @@
 |face=desert_sad
 |dialogue=Forgive me, Haku-...... Wait, no!<br>
-Gyokumen, my mother-in-law!
+Gyokumen, my step mother!
 }}
 {{VN:Dialogue
@@ Line 673: / Line 673: @@
 !<i>Gyokumen -</i>
 !<i>and Red Boy?!</i>
-!<i>But, Gyokumen is supposed to be a princess.....</i>
+!<i>But, Gyokumen is the princess who.....</i>
 |body=
 {{!}}colspan=2{{!}}
@@ Line 955: / Line 955: @@
 |character=Xolotl
 |face=desert_sad
-|dialogue=Hakum-...... No, "mother-in-law."
+|dialogue=Hakum-...... No, "step mom."
 }}
 {{VN:Dialogue
@@ Line 1,152: / Line 1,152: @@
 |face=desert_tasty
 |dialogue=For this event,<br>
-the TSL and Underground Casino dramatically remodeled into a humanistic desert world!
+the TSL and Underground Casino dramatically remodeled into an artificial desert world!
 }}
 {{VN:Dialogue
@@ Line 1,271: / Line 1,271: @@
 |character=Hakumen
 |face=desert_neutral
-|dialogue=If that's true, then I would've given an explanation for the event first, but......
+|dialogue=If I'm being honest, then I would've given an explanation for the event first, but......
 }}
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@@ Line 1,329: / Line 1,329: @@
 |face=desert_embarrassed
 |dialogue=That makes me happy, very happy.<br>
-My, oh my, those words is just, goodness~!
+My, oh my, those words are just, goodness~!
 }}
 {{VN:Dialogue