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@@ Line 4: / Line 4: @@
 |character=Shuten
 |face=neutral
-|dialogue=Oh, [Player]. <br/>
+|dialogue=Oh, <i>[Player]</i>. <br/>
-Sorry for waiting. I've just finish my practice.
+Sorry for making you wait. I've just finished my practice.
 }}
 {{VN:Dialogue
 |character=Shuten
 |face=neutral
-|dialogue=What do you need from me. <br/>
+|dialogue=What do you need from me? <br/>
 ---a festival called "Barentain"?
 }}
@@ Line 16: / Line 16: @@
 |character=Shuten
 |face=neutral
-|dialogue=......What kind of festival is it? <br/>
+|dialogue=... What kind of festival is it? <br/>
-Ho. A day to express your fondness is it.
+Ho. A day to express your fondness, is it?.
 }}
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@@ Line 28: / Line 28: @@
 |character=Shuten
 |face=neutral
-|dialogue=However I don't understand. <br/>
+|dialogue=However, I don't understand. <br/>
-You see, why are you giving it to me though?
+You see, why are you here with me?
 }}
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@@ Line 35: / Line 35: @@
 |face=neutral
 |dialogue=I can't tell if you don't say anything. <br/>
-What do you want from me. Just say it.
+What do you want from me? Just say it.
 }}
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@@ Line 41: / Line 41: @@
 |face=neutral
 |dialogue=No, I'm not mad. <br/>
-I have this mask from the beginning.
+I've had this mask since I was born.
 }}
 {{VN:Dialogue
 |character=Shuten
 |face=neutral
-|dialogue=......Hmm, I see...... <br/>
+|dialogue=... Hmm, I see... <br/>
-Fondness and gratitude, to me......
+Fondness and gratitude, to me...
 }}
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@@ Line 59: / Line 59: @@
 |face=joy
 |dialogue=Umm, I'm staring to sweat all of a sudden. <br/>
-Hmm......
+Hmm...
 }}
 {{VN:Dialogue